Posted by: bordo on: November 1, 2006
the mental warrior
superior and frameless.
came from the inside.
he’s mounting unawareness.
for long time you have waited
his life is eternal
if once he’d been created.
1 | Nika
November 1, 2006 at 1:14 pm
Great! I like simplicity, contradiction of words, multiple meanings. And that short poem is as for me a word about anxiety and searching. Good work!
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